15.02.17
In English we have been working on Creative writing. We have written haiku's, a Sensory language paragraph and created a class padlet. We wrote definitions of a metaphor and simile in own words. I have enjoyed these activities because they have opened up new ideas for myself when I am writing a paragraph.
Over the last few days we learnt that in order to create a good piece of creative writing what do we need to do, so we created our padlet and wrote down ideas of what creates a good padlet. Last week My class and I create 4 haiku's. We found out that haiku's must have something that relates to the four seasons.
The activity I enjoyed the most is writing a sensory language paragraph because I like the idea of pieces of writing that describes things you hear, see, feel, and smell, because you can almost imagine yourself being there.
Things We Have Done
Here is the link to our padlet we created:https://padlet.com/jn23/gvebydw9s70a
Sensory Language Paragraph
I breathe in the bitter salty scent of the glistening seashells which surround the very tip of my toes. My taste buds dance to the saccharine wine that i gulp down my throat. The waves brush against my feet as gently as can be,
while the moons gleams brightly and the sweet tone of a nightingale singing the early hours away.
Metaphors and Similes
Metaphor- Something that makes you feel something. It is something True and untrue in a ordinary sense, and make you see beyond things in reality and imagine the way it is. It is a figure of speech.
Similes- A comparison to one thing to another for example she ran as fast as cheetah
Metaphor
- Something you feel
- A metaphor is a tree, strong and natural
- All the world’s a stage
- Compares two things
- Metaphor is a stronger feature to use.
- A figure of speech.
- Direct comparison.
Similes
- Use the words “like” or “as”
- Comparison from one thing to another.
Kia ora Raven,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your hard work on this. I really enjoyed your sensory language paragraph, especially the part about your taste buds dancing to the saccharine wine. It is unique and really evokes a strong image. Do you feel confident in the difference between metaphor and simile? You have taken some good notes on this topic. To improve, perhaps try to edit the font/colour/layout of your post so that it is more visually appealing and easy to follow.
Ka rawe!
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ReplyDeleteYour blog is pretty long. I haven't read it because don't want to cause I'm lazy.
ReplyDeletePositive- I really liked how you described the way you are seeing,hearing and tasting things in descriptive form which gave more meaning.
ReplyDeleteThoughtful- When I read your sensory paragraph it reminded me of a book I read recently about a girl who discovers more about herself in High School and the freedom she gets when she is at school.
Helpful- It would be good to add photos to make your blog more creative and adding colours would gain attention.